
For this task we had to assess each others current work, and comment on strengths and areas to improve. These were the comments that I received for my current contents page. I received complements like, the layout and color scheme was good, along with the language against the genre. Also I got feedback and instructions on how to make the contents page better. I was told to edit some text so that it made more sense within the content, and to also edit my picture further to allow it to look more suitable for the contents page, and to allow it to look more appealing in general, which I agree with. Furthermore, I will continue to make these changes, in an effort to improve my current grade.

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