Double Page Spread Draft

This is the current stage i am at with my double page spread. Since the last session, I only had a paragraph or so of text, I have now advanced to almost finishing the interview of my double page spread. I have tried to line the text so that it does look professional, however, my plan is to write my interview first, and then make final touches to this, so that it can be perfect. I also edited the pull quote that is next to the picture, so that it is closer to the eye-line of Cheyenne. Once I have completed the text, I may focus on more pull quotes, or to possibly add more smaller images to present my variety of material.

Assessment Feedback

At this certain point in our coursework,where everyone should have at least have content for every page, my lecture took in all of our work that we had, and gave his own comments and ideas on how to improve our magazine. This feedback of the levels, which I  all got at proficient, covers all of my pages, and the comments are on different aspects of different pages. From this information, I can now work to improve and complete these pages, along with my lecture's guidance and personal comments on how I can create and advance my magazine in the most effective way possible.

Peer Assessment On Grammar

We took part in another peer assessment task, however, this one revolved around Grammar and punctuation. These are the comments and feedback I had received from my peers. Making these changes will allow me to make the content professional and correct, and therefore making the magazine of better quality and effect.

Double Page Spread - First Draft

This is my first draft of my double page spread. I have edited the image, to make it look more professional, and fitting to the genre. I have started to add content that suits the needs of a double page spread, like headlines, and an actual interview, along with pull quotes in different locations across the two pages. I really like the cooer scheme at the moment, as it looks professional but also fits the genre. To conclude, I certainly haven't made full changes, and I am still to add more content and features to the pages.

Assessment Feedback For Current Contents Page

For this task we had to assess each others current work, and comment on strengths and areas to improve. These were the comments that I received for my current contents page. I received complements like, the layout and color scheme was good, along with the language against the genre. Also I got feedback and instructions on how to make the contents page better. I was told to edit some text so that it made more sense within the content, and to also edit my picture further to allow it to look more suitable for the contents page, and to allow it to look more appealing in general, which I agree with. Furthermore, I will continue to make these changes, in an effort to improve my current grade.